In my formative essay i decided to write about reserch methods. I think that for my first essay it went well i got the pass grade that i needed to then set my self of the the rest of the essays to come and this made my confidence grow. The feedback was very positive and where there is good there is also improvements, i got told that by making the essay better i had to structure it better and almost making it in to a story my giving it a beginning, middle and end.