I was quite surprised at how positive my feedback was for my first essay. I expected constructive criticism as although I knew I already knew a lot about behaviour (or at least thought I did) I knew absolutely nothing about how an academic course might work as it had been a very long time since I had been in that type of environment. I was given criticism on obvious things such as grammar and improper referencing. Overall I was completely ecstatic with my feedback and in all honestly I am every time I get my essay results. My plans for my future essays are to try and stick more to my actual plan. This seems to be quite difficult for me as I start writing about something thinking it’s a brilliant idea and then I think of another dozen brilliant ideas I want to include. I’d like to try and stick to a few points and write constructively about them. Although this might sound like a pretty simple plan, I am quite interested in a vast amount of things so I need to try and focus more and stick to the point. (This could probably be quite a good life plan for myself in general). I also need to concentrate more, which unfortunately is something I can’t change immediately, this is something I will probably have to work on throughout my life.
I am feeling very grateful.
Have a blessed day.
Namaste.