TASK 9 – Feedback
After receiving feedback from studiosity I identified areas that need improving within my essay writing. There were a couple sentences that were awkwardly written, which in future I will make sure I read out aloud my essay before submitting it to identify these. Also, I have taken away from feed-back that I don’t always answer the question and keep to it. So, in future I plan to keep referring my work back to the question which will hopefully embed it in my thinking. This has taught me how to improve and each time I have taken on board and improved my next essay, getting higher marks each time, so I am learning each time I write. I have also realized that essays need to be written in third person, which I have now been doing.
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